12/4/11

Abyss

The misfiring of neurons
within my damaged synapses
are due to religious shrapnel
leftover from a war
that I can barely remember.
It really makes me think -
or does it?
Who's thoughts are these?
Who put them here?

5 comments:

  1. Life at it's finest. I have moments of utter tragedy when I look back on the past and think about how I acted and what I could have done to make things related to the war better. You're a beautiful poet!

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  2. you are the author of the best

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  3. Wow...Just wow. Brilliant, I can really feel this.

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